the monologue of the penis
i love to cry
while i am inside your cave.
i love to get hard
and eventually get soft.
i can not be long forever
impotence is inevitable.
if i could get my head in your throat
then i can make the world fly.
but there is nothing agonizing
than being kept in dark place
where i am covered.
unlike the fingers and eyes, who are exposed
and i can not be used in anything
but to take a piss
and make a grand entrance in a cave
and an exit of weakness.
i can only be touched by master
and the partner of my master
which somehow makes me dizzy
i can not recognize who’s the partner of my master.
sex- as they call it…
and i call it job.
lust for some…
procreation for me.
love on the line,
and my banging head inside the cave of endless muscles.
can never be free from two balls
hanging at the edge of my every action.
as my master screams for his mighty orgasm
i am left in tears of sperm…
with only two fate on the edge,
will you be a baby, or another stain on the bedsheet?
-mau
malaya!
February 22nd, 2006 at 6:57 pm
hoist grabeh bah. it shows. it really shows. bwahaha. it can pass for a hymn sa the penis talks na theatre play actually. bwahahaha. nice one!
February 26th, 2006 at 9:28 pm
certainly not done in distaste… but if u may,d poem has 2 get rid of some of the scientific terms (dats just wat i think,hehe). how about:
” dysfunction” for impotence
” his mighty wail” ’stead of for his mighty orgasm
“two raging bulls” for two balls (tehee ; -> )
“thrust” ’stead of action
HOWEVER, dont make do with d 3rd to the last line. it’s the most superb and effective!
i am left in tears of sperm…
ONLY A MODERN PABLO NERUDA WOULD THINK OF THAT…
February 27th, 2006 at 4:46 pm
WOW!A “VERY DEEP” POEM FOR MY PARTNER IN LOVE & CRIME! ! ! IT IS INDEED A MASTERPIECE!!! I WISH I COULD MAKE A MELODY OUT OF THAT…HEHEHE… BY THE WAY, SEND TO ME THE LYRICS OF “IN YOUR OWN TIME”! ! !